Clear progression throughout Band-7 & Clear overall progression 6-band
Band 7-(it’s easy to fallow from start to end, no lapses
Band-6 (May be some lapses why this sentence is doing there??- Incorrect use of a connector – linking devices- two small sentences confusing)
Band-5 lack of progression lack of confusion in different places in
Key words time representation
Cohesive devices: whereas, in contrast, while, despite, although however except
Cohesive devices for time reference (Before-and then, after, meanwhile)
Progression: how quickly we move from one category to next category
Must not describe every detail from the question, but on the other hand, you must include all the most important information.
Second- largest produce
You must organise categories from; biggest to smallest, smallest to biggest, highest to lowest, lowest to highest or whatever is relevant to the categories.
Overview – Summery of trends-
No over view, will not get good points)
Selecting appropriate data
If the units mentioned wrongly consistently throughout the data
If billion mentioned and written as Dollars-Wrong-X